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PostSubject: Re: The One's who are call talented   Mon Feb 15, 2010 8:15 am

yea its good where is takashi?
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PostSubject: Re: The One's who are call talented   Mon Feb 15, 2010 7:11 pm

when is there going to be another chapter im still dieing here

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PostSubject: Re: The One's who are call talented   Mon Feb 15, 2010 7:17 pm

hold ur dieing dood
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PostSubject: Re: The One's who are call talented   Mon Feb 15, 2010 7:43 pm

i love the story i cant wait to be introduced and who is master moon
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PostSubject: Re: The One's who are call talented   Tue Feb 16, 2010 8:47 pm

write now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Evil or Very Mad Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil Twisted Evil

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PostSubject: Re: The One's who are call talented   Wed Feb 17, 2010 4:23 pm

nice stroy but write a different chapter im like leji im dieing here
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PostSubject: Re: The One's who are call talented   Wed Feb 17, 2010 8:43 pm

bumping takashi write we all want to see our characters too
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PostSubject: Re: The One's who are call talented   Fri Feb 19, 2010 3:35 pm

write god damnit
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PostSubject: Re: The One's who are call talented   Sat Feb 20, 2010 10:54 am

Chapter 2 part 1 "I am sorry "


"Leji father tells leji to stay behind with Master Perfect "

"Leji's father hold's takashi by holding his head and then Laughs you want to fight Takashi , why don’t you fight me as i can see you like to fight those weaker than you , because you hate losing "

"Tears start to rush takashi's eye's are bleeding in tears , takashi runs aiming to use chidori at leji’s father , Leji's father moves to his left and then hold takashi hands , take it easy he reply “Leji’s father” , I can see that you don’t have many friend takashi "


"Takashi cries even more as his hand is bleeding "

"Father speaking: Takashi you where born along the onoda clan the strongest clan in the village but only few people share your same traits and that is why your hated in the world every one is scare of you’re clan , people think your clan will bring doom to the village and for those reason you have no friend and you feel like killing those who hate you "


"Takashi Eye's change Dont say just things "


"Father of leji reply let it out in me "


"Icegan Leji get behind Takashi and uses 32 snow palms and takashi faints "


"Then his carry to the aisu clan Hidden grounds "

"takashi wakes up and then he says where i am i , leji and master get in the room and then takashi said i am sorry for what i did as you’re dad said is all true . "My clan is almost dead because of my Brother and The first Onoda .


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Chapter 2 pare 2 "secrets "
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PostSubject: Re: The One's who are call talented   Sat Feb 20, 2010 11:21 am

love this part.

i cant wait to here the secretes of the onada

gets popcorn ready come on

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PostSubject: Re: The One's who are call talented   Mon Feb 22, 2010 5:44 pm

Chapter 2 part 2 " Secrets"


"It all began when i was born , My names was a legend i was the master of the body my name was the first onoda legendary warrior and founding father of the clan , father of the great "Hisashi " and my young son "Takashi". When takashi was seven he had graduated out of the academy but non like his brother "Hisashi " that had graduated at age of five. "Hisashi" was the teacher and sensei of takashi because , the first onoda had die in the first years of takashi birth . When takashi became a genin at the age of ten he didn’t have a official squad or any sensei so for mean time he has been train by his brother .
Just half a year ago his brother had kill The second yamakage one of the great onoda clan ninja . And his brother left the village for evil doings, some say he searches powers . And for years takashi dreams has been to be the next yamakage and kill his borther for killing his closet family member the third yamakage his uncle.


And thats my story .


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next time :Gradutation exams chapter 2 part 3 .
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PostSubject: Re: The One's who are call talented   Mon Feb 22, 2010 5:58 pm

Chapter 2 part 3 graduation

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The academy instructor calls leji aisu and then his taking to a room.


Instructor-Hello leji-Kun today i am going to be testing you are you ready ?

Leji-Yes sir "

Instructor- Ok leji make a clone ?

Leji-I perform hand seals "Poof" A clone "

Instructor-Very good leji ?


Leji-Ok what next’s "


instructor-Next i need you to transform to a dog.


Leji-Preform hand seals he transforms to a dog ?


Instructor-Ok final and last step Defeat me prove you name to me ?


Leji- Ok Lets go "Icegan" leji starts shoot Ice senbon toward the instuctor.


Instrouctor-with ease doges the snbon.


Leji-Darn ...... "enough" Snow blizzard


Instoructor- A b-rank jutsu imposible , Fire blazing shadow the snow melts ?


Leji-.............


Instroctor-you pass .


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next Moon


Instructor-hello moon.


moon- What fool .


Instructor- Who are you calling names .


moon-you herd me geek.


Instructor-"Lets see what makes you so cocky "


Moon- "Clone jutsu , transformation jutsu " is that all Geek?


Instructor-Laughs lets see what you got.


Moon- My dream is to kill and kill , elemental strike perfect moon phase jutsu "a orb of chakra made of five elements is coming toward the instructor along with a moon sword projectile .


Instutore-Ok good , Earth wall, it breaks the teacher gets hurt darn , you pass this kid can use a a-rank is he even better than Takashi-kun.


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PostSubject: Re: The One's who are call talented   Tue Feb 23, 2010 3:02 pm

man why are the episodes so damn short huh that gets on my nerves

but any ways nice chapters

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