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PostSubject: The Ninja Story   Tue Feb 09, 2010 6:01 pm

Well im creating my own story based on 4 main character's named mastermaru,takashi uchiha,kizo hyuuga an leji hyuuga.
this is based on the storys of takashi an leji an master perfect an kizo from the forum.

story's well be out almost everyday an i need a tv dude that critizes my episodes every time they come out.

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Leji Hyuuga
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Takashi Uchiha
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Mastermaru perfect
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Kizo Hyuuga
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Jando Uzuki:
jando uzuki is a ninja that hates takashi. he claims to be the rival of him. takashi doesn't really take him seriously though.for that jando loves to call him his rival.jando is 13 years old.jutsu/tools.he posses a sword once possesed by hayate an after his death yugao uzuki had it.afetr she retired she made a mire copy of the sword for her own son to posses.jando jutsu is still unknown.jando is normally seen with an shirt like takashi's but red an black ninja pants with leaf village head band on forehead.he also posses his sword in his holster in his back.jando loves to act cocky an trys to get all the girls which by giving him-self the lady's man hidden ninja.

ichamaru nara:
ichamaru nara is the son of shikamaru nara an ino yamaka.he is best friends with leji hyuuga an takashi uchiha.he hates show offs an acts just like his dad.he always calls things drag an always sleeping but one difference from his dad he loves fight.jutsu/tools,hasen't yet shown any jutsu.or ninja tools.ichamaru wears burgendy ninja pants with a shirt on with his clan symbol on th back an on his left arm.he wears his headband on his right arm.

tyumi nakda:tyumi is a shy girl.she is 13 years old an was a medical ninja at the age of 9 she then got into the acedemy by the hospital owner.because she is an orphan she lives by her-self an she is very mysterious.jutsu tools.no tools or jutsu has been seen yet.



note:this is the future there will be alot of naruto shipuden character's in this series but not that much.i will use fake game an real jutsu.
note:there are 5 man squads not 4


INDEX:
Chapter 1 -1 page
Chapter 2 -2 page


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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Tue Feb 09, 2010 8:00 pm

chapter one:Introduction
It was a hot sunny day when a boy that lives in the main braches house.the boy woke up named leji hyuuga.he wore white shorts hidden leaf headband on forehead clan picture/symobol on his gray tee-shirt.long brown hair getting shorter near his back.''Kizo sister get up''. the girl named kizo was little looks a little young but looked talented.She wore the exact same thing as leji except she has girlier version.she has long hair like hianta but its brown.she wore one armed raped an one leg wraped with some pants just like hiantas excpt white with a shirt like sakura but whiteish grayish an had the clan sign/symbol on it.''alright leji im comming''
hiashi then says''leji kizo get up you are one-week away from being genin''.''i can't wait i hope i be on the same team as takashi'' says kizo while she blushes.neji an hannebii walks in have a good day now.

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As a handsome young man wakes he grabs his clothes ''damn im going to be late''
the boy looked just like sasuke uchiha but had longer hair.the boy grabed his skinny scroll put his pouch on then left.''were are you going takashi''says sasuke.''im going to school''.''i see i thought you should take the day off an spend it training''.''sorry father but i have too go i meet my sensei today an my squad member's''.'' okay then but tommarow then'' tommarow'' says takashi. ''sakura comes give him a kiss okay go an be the best''.''takashi thinks in his head i hope my team mates will be strong an my sensei to so i can challenge them''

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the boy named mastermaru wakes up an grabs his weaponds an scroll an runs out. i see the boy lives by him-self.
the boy runs out the window really fast i hope i dont get paired up with any loser's.says mastermaru.


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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Wed Feb 10, 2010 5:22 am

anyone likes the story so far
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Wed Feb 10, 2010 9:04 am

nice story man
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Wed Feb 10, 2010 1:36 pm

thanks man did you see your character i have to edit him but i was rushing to this
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Wed Feb 10, 2010 1:37 pm

yea i saw it and i like it u must of worked hard
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Wed Feb 10, 2010 1:54 pm

yes i did you wasn't registed so i didn't know what to give you but i came up with a good idea.
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Wed Feb 10, 2010 2:00 pm

also do you want to be my news guy that critiz my episodes everyone your perfect for the job because your ver active
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Wed Feb 10, 2010 2:02 pm

yea im active so this wil be my job
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Wed Feb 10, 2010 2:13 pm

okay thanks you will be channel 75 an when i say you change your station you are getting more rep an people are watching your show lol.
an you have too do your show on this chapter
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Wed Feb 10, 2010 2:24 pm

ok
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Wed Feb 10, 2010 3:18 pm

make it
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Wed Feb 10, 2010 3:22 pm

Leji was fighting MP wanna do it like that
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Wed Feb 10, 2010 3:30 pm

you dont get it ima show you an example


*hey this is perfect t.v reporting to you is master perfect.clicks the applause button.todays episode was good at introducing the character's but there wasn't as much info for mastermaru.then you can have guess star you can do anything you want also rate it out of 10*
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Wed Feb 10, 2010 3:34 pm

hey this is MP T.V With your host here Master Aisa Like That
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Wed Feb 10, 2010 4:46 pm

yea thats a start
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Wed Feb 10, 2010 4:48 pm

ok u wanna start
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Wed Feb 10, 2010 5:16 pm

yea its your show you do it you come on every day at 8 oclock just role play an if i do double or triple chapter then you come on that number of times kk. start
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Wed Feb 10, 2010 5:19 pm

hey this is MP T.V With your host here Master Aisa *Clicks* we are going to show you how Lejis life was when he was little.
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Wed Feb 10, 2010 5:33 pm

it should be about the story you have to say what you liked about yesterdays chapter an what you didn't like do you get it an it should be long like your really broad casting so not a sentance unless its something like no show today
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Wed Feb 10, 2010 5:36 pm

im outits hard
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Wed Feb 10, 2010 5:44 pm

okay i'll get someone else to do it when you see how they do it it's not going to be that hard
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Wed Feb 10, 2010 6:51 pm

nice story brother could i do the tv interviewing thing my show is called aj t.v. on channel 100
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Wed Feb 10, 2010 7:23 pm

yea sure go ahead
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Thu Feb 11, 2010 2:13 pm

i am waiting btw sup leji
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