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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sat Feb 13, 2010 8:34 pm

yo anthony u r a Mod ok dude
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sat Feb 13, 2010 8:38 pm

ants a mod thats up to takshi

takashi im makeing chapter 3,4 today kkkk. just because you an mp really want's to hear it.

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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sat Feb 13, 2010 8:38 pm

Ok leji ?

get to work ?

i cant wait ?
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sat Feb 13, 2010 8:40 pm

takashi ant should be a mod
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sat Feb 13, 2010 8:46 pm

Yeah ?

but ill have to test him First ?
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sat Feb 13, 2010 8:52 pm

then test him
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sat Feb 13, 2010 9:07 pm

Chapter 3: Takashi's Time To Shine

The chuunin walks into room 211 an finds 4 students there waiting for there test. The four Students were Takashi uchiha, kizo hyuuga, tsunami idle, an inari nara.

The chuunin named sibirukou was standing clearing his throat. '' will takashi uchiha step forward ''.Takashi smiles.''humph i guess it's my time to shine''. '' all of the others hang tight while im testing takashi''. Sibirukou walks with takashi they continue to walk for a while an takashi see's that its now completely dark. '' now takashi we will began on exam 1. '' humph peace of cake''The first exam will be tested on ninjutsu an genjutsu.''okay''.now what is chakra element.''fire''.can you manuplate fire if you tryed.''yes''.do you have fire jutsu.''yes''.''okay show me''.'' YOU MIGHT WANNA STAND BACK,HUMPH''.''firestyle:fire ball jutsu''. A big ball of fire releases from takashi mouth in flames the chuunin eyes almost pop out his head on the size of the fire style.
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''okay thats was impresive''.So which one you want making genjutsu or defending it.'' creating it''.''LOOK INTO MY EYES''.takashi says repeatedly.''SHARNIGAN''.Sibirukou is in the genjutsu.Or is he.

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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sat Feb 13, 2010 9:10 pm

Yey i love it write more i cant wait ?
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sat Feb 13, 2010 9:32 pm

this is everyone's favorite show aj t.v.
reporting from aj studio's.on channel 100.
the rating on today's episode is
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this is aj t.v signing off.clicks the button to make the t.v cut off ''why the hell wont the button work''. i know someone was fucking with my damn remote someone going to die.

THE FOLLOWING SCENES ARE RATED R AN WILL NOT BE SHOWED ON T.V

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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sat Feb 13, 2010 10:42 pm

i just got done reading the story
nice story leji i hope i be in it.

nice/funny ass show anthony lol im still laughing
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sun Feb 14, 2010 12:18 am

i just read the whole thing an its awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!! i hope there's more girls though
an i love your show anthony hatake
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sun Feb 14, 2010 5:06 am

alright u should here my there r gonna be plenty girls alright hehehe
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sun Feb 14, 2010 10:19 am

so your making a story to mp cant wait
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sun Feb 14, 2010 10:20 am

yup ima make it stay tight on the new show
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sun Feb 14, 2010 11:08 am

what
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sun Feb 14, 2010 11:23 am

i cant wait for chapter 4
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sun Feb 14, 2010 11:34 am

me either
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sun Feb 14, 2010 12:04 pm

i made chapter 4 an it got deleted sorry im not writting the chapter today

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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sun Feb 14, 2010 12:08 pm

me either
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sun Feb 14, 2010 1:13 pm

change of plans im going to right it

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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sun Feb 14, 2010 2:31 pm

go ahead you dont need too post it really
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sun Feb 14, 2010 3:43 pm

well it was an anoncement to every body

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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sun Feb 14, 2010 3:46 pm

Well Then Sorry Anyways done
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sun Feb 14, 2010 5:25 pm

Chapter 4:Takashi's weakness an Strengths

Takashi smiking.''I never suspected the son of sasuke uchiha would be so bad at genjutsu'',he says to takashi.''Stop bluffing''.takshi says angerly.''its not a bluff''.saribirmi says.''genjutsu release''.The darness slowsly fades away.
''impossible''.{this guy can see through my genjutsu with his normal eye, he must be apart of some clan}takashi thinks.
takashi slowlys falls to the ground.''takashi you earned 50 points for the first exam''.''okay the second part is to test your defense''.''okay this should be easy''takashi smirks while activating his sharnigan''.'' Im not going to go easy on you''.''humph''.takashi gesters.

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Saribirmi takes out 5 kncucle blades[asuma blades]an then throws them at takashi.takshi dodges them with ease.
''that was too easy''.takashi says while smiling an laughing.'' Are you really chuunin''.just as takashi is talking saribirmi is moving his fingers.''you added a chakra blade on the kunias since your wind chakra nature you can do that,humph.''saribirmi you can see my chakra thread''.''humph''.the blades come back around takashi.takashi jumps in the air.the sharnigan is still activated.''i guess since i dodged your attack its time for some tool offense''.''this jutsu i copied from my friend leji hyuuga''.He takes out 5 kunias.''wind style:rising kunia''.he throws the kunias in the air they start to float the in the air.the kunias then start to fly at the saribirmi.''takashi runs.''kunias shadow clone jutsu''.The 5 kunias run at him then turns into 50.''oh shit i guess im going to have to use head hunter jutsu again''.Takashi scames the area.''its so dark an smoky i hardly could see if i got him or not''.Takashi feels the ground began to shake.''earth style:head hunter jutsu.takashi is in the ground struggleing to get out.
''takashi uchiha you pass the ninja acedemy exams''.''yes but are you going to let me out of the head hunter jutsu''.
''oh yea sorry about that, but that attack did you say you copied it from leji hyuuga''.''Yes''.''I hope to test him to he is a hyuuga clan protagy an can use tool jutsu just like his mother tenten hyuuga''.
''release''.suddenly the darkness is gone an were back in the acedemy.''go to room 411 an wait for the other students the following people have already passed''.
-ichamaru nara
-mastermaru perfect
-leji hyuuga
-kizo hyuuga
-shibi aburame
-siso flip
-inari achery
-kuroda hatake
-Tamaru flip
-byo hatake
-unizu uchiha
-jando uzuki
-tyumi nakada
-takashi uchiha
-cirya uzumaki
-obino hyuuga
-----------------------------WE INTERUPT THIS EPISODE WITH A MOMENT WITH OUR CHARACETRS---------------------------

KIZO:WHEN THE HELL AM I GOING TO BE IN THE DAMN SHOW.
LEJI:I PASSED THE EXAMS HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA.
TAKASHI:I PASSED HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA
ICHAMARU:I PASSED HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAH
KIZO:HOW THE HELL A SIDE/MAIN CHARACTER HAS MORE LINES THEN ME
LEJI:LAUGHS
KIZO:MAD[GET BACK TO THE DAMN SHOW]
------------------------------WE NOW CONTINUE WITH THE SHOW---------------------------------- ------------------------------
as takashi walks in he see all his friends passed.
''what took you so long takashi''says ichimaru.'' we were talking most of the time''. ''but guys look at that guy,his name is mastermaru''.''what about him''leji says.He came out the exam regular.every one that took the exams are now injured has marks all over there body an ripped clothing.he has nothing on him at all''.''leji could...''.takashi is interrupted by leji.''already on it''.''BYAKUGAN''.Leji eyes get veins on them while he scanes mastermaru whole body an chakra points.''THIS GUY HAS ALL 5 CHAKRA NATURES''.''Impossible''.takashi an ichimaru screams.
Everyone starts to stare at them.
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sun Feb 14, 2010 5:48 pm

I love chapter 4 ?
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