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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sun Feb 14, 2010 6:12 pm

thanks im about to edit the characters bio's

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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sun Feb 14, 2010 8:19 pm

u dont need to post it man when your done u say im done withthat and etc
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sun Feb 14, 2010 9:22 pm

dude you can spam in here not that much but you can do some spam

an sorry guys bad news my computer crashed while i was posting the new chapter an the new character bio's i'll try an finish them tonight

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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sun Feb 14, 2010 9:32 pm

wow um..ok? tommorow then no ones online so there not gonna see the post man
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sun Feb 14, 2010 11:39 pm

yea that makes since an when are you going to make your story mp

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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sun Feb 14, 2010 11:43 pm

when people are on
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Mon Feb 15, 2010 12:53 am

its time for everybodys favorite show
A.J TV ON CHANNELL 100.

I GIVE CHAPTER 4 A
Spoiler:
 

todays show is cut short good by

clicks remote button yayayay it finally works thats what i thought

GOOD NIGHT
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Mon Feb 15, 2010 8:37 am

we should start again soon XD Razz Razz
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Mon Feb 15, 2010 11:12 am

i liked your show ant.

you've just been moved to chanell 91

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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Mon Feb 15, 2010 11:13 am

uh wow anyways start
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Mon Feb 15, 2010 12:15 pm

i liked your show anthony
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Mon Feb 15, 2010 12:17 pm

and your gonna like mins hinata
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Wed Feb 17, 2010 4:32 pm

i really like this story really long an has lots of deatails

but write a new chapter allready
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Fri Feb 19, 2010 10:37 pm

Chapter 5: MASTERMARU SUSPISION

As Ichimaru, leji, and takashi walk up to the boy the first person who says hi is

mastermaru.''hi''.''Hi i was just wondering what your last name was''.says leji.
Who mines its mastermaru perfect.leji takashi an ichimaru eyes get big as they stare at

him.I told ya. says leji. Well we were just wondering if you would like to train with us

today an others.''Sure but im not going to take it easy on you''.takashi smiles an leji looks

anoyed.ichimaru on the other hand looks very happy.


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They all meet up in the forest of death. They sneak in an goes near the middle an all 4

square off. Mastermaru okay its 4 people i can use 5 elements this should be easy

becasue there all not going after me.he thinks. Leji *Byakugan* Mastermaru stands there

i new he was a skilled byakugan user. Im not going to lose i refuse to make a bad first

impression. Takashi *Sharnigan* an ichimaru, humph show offs. Lets get this started

ichimaru throws 5 kunias at leji,leji dodges with ease then he runs at takashi aiming for

chakra points takashi jumps in the air an lands on a tree.'' humph perfect''.takashi say.

Mastermaru remains still abserving the ninja then out of no were he cant move.'' What

the hell.
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What happen to mastermaru

you'll figure it out



next time:Chapter 6 the secretes of the nara clan

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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Fri Feb 19, 2010 11:06 pm

Chapter 6: THE SECRETES OF THE NARA CLAN

As mastermaru tries to move he cant. Is this some type of genjutsu. No man this is my

shadow posesion jutsu. huh. I knew i read something in the acedemy about this clan

jutsu. So you know that its over right. Not if i say so;takashi comes off the tree throwing

a wind mill shrieken with chakra threads to destract ichimaru.''Come on takashi you

allways do this jutsu on us i cant see the chkara threads but i know their there. Leji back

me up. Leji come out of no were an chops the chakra threads using gental fist then he

say ichimaru hold him.''okay''. '' Eight trigram 32 palms''. Leji attacks 32 different chakra

points.
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[POOF].'' No leji you were suspost to analayz the chakra points to attack them.'' ichimaru

i swear that clone had chakra points''. ''Indeed it did leji''. Mastermaru comes out of the

bushes.''this is my special jutsu.''Clone support jutsu'',this jutsu allows me to make an

exact copy of my self except the clone doesn't share my thoats it attacks an thinks on its

own.'' Takashi suddenly jumps out the bushes [tiger,beer,ox,tiger]firestyle:pheniox flower

jutsu''. A giant fire ball comes after leji, ichimaru, an mastermaru.Water style:water

splash justu to cancell the fire style comming at mastermaru.Then leji uses eight trigram

palm rotation to stop the fire ball. Then ichimaru has no way to escape he then jumped

out the way but still get hit alil from the after shock. While Ichimaru is on the floor

mastermaru jumps in the air '' chidori''.Ichimaru has no were to go.
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Will ichimaru get hit with the chidori an injured.
Is mastermaru really fighting with the ambition to kill.

Next time:A strange friend

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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sat Feb 20, 2010 10:06 am

bumping no one read the latest chapter's

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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sat Feb 20, 2010 10:17 am

I read them ?

their really good ?
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sat Feb 20, 2010 10:36 am

thanks whats your favorite chapter an character

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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sat Feb 20, 2010 10:40 am

My favorite character is Takashi and my favorite chapter is here to come meaning in the future when i get mangekyou and things ?
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sat Feb 20, 2010 10:57 am

besides takashi

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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sat Feb 20, 2010 11:02 am

Leji is my second favorite character ?
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sat Feb 20, 2010 11:08 am

oh okay wait tell i make the other character bio's

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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sat Feb 20, 2010 11:35 am

Yeah ?
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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Sat Feb 20, 2010 11:57 am

how come you dont have character bio's in your story

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PostSubject: Re: The Ninja Story   Mon Feb 22, 2010 5:59 pm

i want the reader to learn about the characters as the read ?
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